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Post by Guest Mon Jul 07, 2014 1:47 am

What does this make you think of? Please comment


Nothing would be the same. Not now, not ever.
Mother told me to calm down, but my knuckles went white from holding onto the chair. Mr. Gale kept chatting with Principal Hedgewin. I couldn’t believe what I was hearing. . . .
“Yes! Rayne would perfectly fit into our talent school! She has the talent and everything else we are looking for!”
No. Not happening.
Hedgewin stood up as Mother spoke, “Ah Mr. Gale, where exactly is this school again?”
The short stubby man turned to my mother, “Well in Oregon of course.”
Oregon? No.
“Oh how marvelous,” Mother’s fake gooey voice oozed.
The bell sounded and Hedgewin turned to me, “Rayne you can run along now, I believe third period is starting.”
They are crazy. They have to be.
I stood up to go as they gushed about the boarding school behind the closed door.

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Post by Mark Mon Jul 07, 2014 10:35 am

it makes me think of something from the WingFeather Saga.  It's a book about this group of kids making their way to safety from 'The Fangs from Dang.'  (They lay low for a while and go to school but they are very special people that have the talent to do something wonderful together)  I hope that helped c:
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Post by Hazza Mon Jul 07, 2014 1:46 pm

I'm not exactly sure what I think of when I read it, but I like it.
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Post by Admin Mon Jul 07, 2014 3:56 pm

I like it but like Sammy said, nothing distinct really came to my head when I read it? <3
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Post by Maddy Mon Jul 07, 2014 4:00 pm

Like Anika and Sammy said, nothing really comes to mind but it's still good c:
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Post by King K Mon Jul 07, 2014 4:01 pm

I think it's pretty good because I doesn't give away too much of the story yet it doesn't give a way too little, definitely write this story up!
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Post by Guest Tue Jul 08, 2014 12:55 pm

Thanks guys Very Happy

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Post by Sadie♡ Tue Jul 08, 2014 12:59 pm

Yes I agree with everyone above<333 cc:
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Post by Hazza Sat Sep 06, 2014 11:18 pm

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