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Post by Catty♡ Mon Aug 11, 2014 10:49 pm

so I thought I would make it a little easier for you all to read... click the spoiler at the bottom of the page if you want to see it in bigger print
 
I hate the way you make me feel
Like I'm worthless, useless and cheap
Your words, filled with malice make me reel
Your bitter sneer at me like I'm the stupid freak
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The thing that tears me apart, is that I fell for you
It pierces me to the heart, every time you look away
I'll never be good enough in your view
If I told you how I feel you would laugh in my face and say
Go away
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Sometimes I wish I was not who I am
That I could change into one of those pretty girls
But you see through me like a skiagram
My head is spinning in swirls
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I can never look you straight in the eye
I walked away, like the coward I was
Never letting you see the tears I cry
All you'll ever see is my flaws
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(A/N okay so comment tell me how my poem is, sorry if its a little sad)
bigger print:
I hate the way you make me feel
Like I'm worthless, useless and cheap
Your words, filled with malice make me reel
Your bitter sneer at me like I'm the stupid freak
-
The thing that tears me apart, is that I fell for you
It pierces me to the heart, every time you look away
I'll never be good enough in your view
If I told you how I feel you would laugh in my face and say
Go away
-
Sometimes I wish I was not who I am
That I could change into one of those pretty girls
But you see through me like a skiagram
My head is spinning in swirls
-
I can never look you straight in the eye
I walked away, like the coward I was
Never letting you see the tears I cry
All you'll ever see is my flaws
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Post by Ani Mon Aug 11, 2014 10:50 pm

omg its amazing as usual 
i love ur poems!
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Post by Hazza Mon Aug 11, 2014 10:53 pm

Omg that was amazing!
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Post by Catty♡ Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:39 am

Thanks you :]
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Post by Hazza Fri Sep 12, 2014 4:17 pm

Locked.
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