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Need some help with this.
Not sure if you guys know, but I've been writing a fanfiction. It's basically a Luke fanfiction where he's dating a girl named Aria (based off of Aria Montgomery from pll). Well, I'm getting to the point where Luke has to tell her what he did to her. I don't want it to be that he cheated on her, but it has to be really huge that makes her basically hate him. She already hates him a little when he got them lost and it ended on her getting beat up by some guys. Anyways any suggestions is appreciated! :DDD
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"Aria, I ate the last muffin."
lol just kidding.
It could be that maybe...he has to move soon and never told her? Lol I'm so bad at this. Or maybe like he is going on some tour the next day and decided not to tell her until the day before.
I'm really sorry that my ideas suck. Your fanfic seems cool though! Good luck!!! I'll let you know if I think of anything else
lol just kidding.
It could be that maybe...he has to move soon and never told her? Lol I'm so bad at this. Or maybe like he is going on some tour the next day and decided not to tell her until the day before.
I'm really sorry that my ideas suck. Your fanfic seems cool though! Good luck!!! I'll let you know if I think of anything else
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I guess he maybe hurt someone she loved or something, like a close friend or family member?
Idk
Idk
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Thanks for all suggestions guys ~
Omg Miranda I ate the last muffin I'm dying xDD
Gabby that's good, but omg this is just so hard gahhh
Omg Miranda I ate the last muffin I'm dying xDD
Gabby that's good, but omg this is just so hard gahhh
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Hmm maybe he got involved in something bad and it involved someone she loved, and it ended up hurting that person? [I'm so sorry, my ideas are bad]
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No no it isn't bad, but it's just so hard at times. I feel kinda bad for Luke as well, but like Aria she's feeling sorry for things too.
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Well how about he tells her he's in a gang or something that would be interesting, or if he tells her he had to set her up to get beat by those guys, orrr possibly that he's a supernatural creature that would add a great twist.
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Oh my gosh that's so good Sara! Perhaps I could combine a few ideas to make it so good. That would be amazing.
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I love all the idea's c:
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Yay ;D
Anymore ideas?
Anymore ideas?
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that he is cheating on her for spencer bc then toby and u know and then it would be a twist
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lol I don't want it to be cheating, but that is still good since it takes pll even further into the story.
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ok then luke turns out to be a pigpocketer and has been stealing things from spencer?? and then toby fights luke lol pls bring mona into this somehow
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Oh my gosh idk it's just that Aria hasn't talked to any of her friends from Rosewood in so long so it would be so weird to bring people back, but maybe I can try to combine Sara's and your idea.
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Thanks to everyone for their ideas. I posted my chapter. I was really exited about writing it!
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