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Post by Hazza Sun Sep 21, 2014 1:44 pm

Not sure if you guys know, but I've been writing a fanfiction. It's basically a Luke fanfiction where he's dating a girl named Aria (based off of Aria Montgomery from pll). Well, I'm getting to the point where Luke has to tell her what he did to her. I don't want it to be that he cheated on her, but it has to be really huge that makes her basically hate him. She already hates him a little when he got them lost and it ended on her getting beat up by some guys. Anyways any suggestions is appreciated! :DDD
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Post by Miranda Winchester Sun Sep 21, 2014 1:56 pm

"Aria, I ate the last muffin."

lol just kidding.

It could be that maybe...he has to move soon and never told her? Lol I'm so bad at this. Or maybe like he is going on some tour the next day and decided not to tell her until the day before.

I'm really sorry that my ideas suck. Your fanfic seems cool though! Good luck!!! I'll let you know if I think of anything else
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Post by Guest Sun Sep 21, 2014 1:56 pm

I guess he maybe hurt someone she loved or something, like a close friend or family member?
Idk

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Post by Hazza Sun Sep 21, 2014 1:57 pm

Thanks for all suggestions guys ~
Omg Miranda I ate the last muffin I'm dying xDD
Gabby that's good, but omg this is just so hard gahhh
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Post by Guest Sun Sep 21, 2014 2:01 pm

Hmm maybe he got involved in something bad and it involved someone she loved, and it ended up hurting that person? [I'm so sorry, my ideas are bad]

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Post by Hazza Sun Sep 21, 2014 2:02 pm

No no it isn't bad, but it's just so hard at times. I feel kinda bad for Luke as well, but like Aria she's feeling sorry for things too.
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Post by Guest Sun Sep 21, 2014 2:05 pm

Well how about he tells her he's in a gang or something that would be interesting, or if he tells her he had to set her up to get beat by those guys, orrr possibly that he's a supernatural creature that would add a great twist.

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Post by Hazza Sun Sep 21, 2014 2:48 pm

Oh my gosh that's so good Sara! Perhaps I could combine a few ideas to make it so good. That would be amazing.
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Post by King K Mon Sep 22, 2014 11:11 am

I love all the idea's c:
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Post by Hazza Mon Sep 22, 2014 5:00 pm

Yay ;D
Anymore ideas?
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Post by Guest Thu Sep 25, 2014 12:24 pm

that he is cheating on her for spencer bc then toby and u know and then it would be a twist

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Post by Hazza Thu Sep 25, 2014 12:34 pm

lol I don't want it to be cheating, but that is still good since it takes pll even further into the story.
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Post by Guest Thu Sep 25, 2014 12:37 pm

ok then luke turns out to be a pigpocketer and has been stealing things from spencer?? and then toby fights luke lol pls bring mona into this somehow

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Post by Hazza Thu Sep 25, 2014 12:44 pm

Oh my gosh idk it's just that Aria hasn't talked to any of her friends from Rosewood in so long so it would be so weird to bring people back, but maybe I can try to combine Sara's and your idea.
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Post by Hazza Thu Sep 25, 2014 2:48 pm

Thanks to everyone for their ideas. I posted my chapter. I was really exited about writing it!

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