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Post by lena Sat Mar 07, 2015 3:19 pm

Well....
I really want this book I almost finished making to be published. he he. I actually want to become an author when I grow up. I don't want to be just an author, I want to become other things, too.
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. I'm hoping to make my book about uh.. let's see......200 and something pages long. Who knows. Maybe more. Anyways, here is my brief summary:

Two beautiful princesses. Whom one is engaged. The one who is engaged is very careless about everything. She leaves everything everywhere for maids to clean up after her. She is even careless about her engagement ring!! How surprising!!! The other Princess who is not sloppy, fun, loving,caring and honest. One day the Which of Responsibility wants to make the other girl who is careless about everything become more responsible. So she uses the other girl. She tells the girl who is NOT sloppy to hide the ring for the family and maids to worry. And they all do worry when the girl hides it. Now, why would she do that with out a reward? She did receive a reward. She received 1 wish. What was that wish she made? A pet dog. When the maids find out the hiding place they ask who did it and the girl who is honest says it's her. No one really believes her after that. She told the whole story and everyone blames the witch. They found out about the dog. The dog has to go away because of Maid Scrubby's allergies. The girl does not have a happy ending, but the other girl forgives and they show great love.



(Only breif summary and I already have names, but I didn't show)




BTW, Stacey, Pony and Read already read a little bit of my book. I just wanted to see what they thought.
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Post by King K Sat Mar 07, 2015 3:57 pm

Well done <3
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Post by ReadtheRavishing Sat Mar 07, 2015 4:30 pm

I think with editing and work it has potential Smile
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Post by Hazza Sat Mar 07, 2015 5:14 pm

It sounds like a nice book
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Post by lena Sat Mar 07, 2015 5:25 pm

*clears throat* There's details. They don't show on her though. ty
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Post by goCards Sat Mar 07, 2015 5:53 pm

fun
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Post by MollyFlyer Tue Mar 10, 2015 8:16 pm

But if she's a princess, wouldn't her desire for a dog be given more consideration than a maid's allergies? It's easier to get a new maid than a new princess, after all.

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Post by goCards Thu Mar 12, 2015 2:11 am

are you showing us more of what you have done?
link to published product?
enjoy your work!
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Post by Ash Thu Mar 12, 2015 10:43 am

nice job
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Post by lena Fri Mar 13, 2015 8:40 pm

Molly, I know what you mean, but there are a lot of details in the book. So not everything is on there. I'll give it to you. Smile The King and Queen do not know that the princess wants to get rid of Maid Scrubby. The King and Queen feel pity for the Maid, so they could not fire her. I know I could have changed the maid, however, I did not because it gave the story a little twist. And a lesson, too.
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Post by goCards Fri Mar 13, 2015 9:49 pm

do it, AG.
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Post by lena Sat Mar 14, 2015 5:36 pm

do what?
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Post by goCards Sat Mar 14, 2015 6:16 pm

publish..
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Post by MollyFlyer Sun Mar 15, 2015 3:39 pm

Okay, but couldn't the maid be transferred or something so she'd still be employed but the princess could have her dog?

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Post by Miranda Winchester Sun Mar 15, 2015 5:32 pm

This is very cool! Nice work Smile
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Post by lena Sun Mar 15, 2015 5:55 pm

Not really sure what you mean, Molly. But I will get in some edits.
This is not my final draft, I guess.
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Post by lena Sun Mar 22, 2015 2:07 pm

Please Lock. Thank you!
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Post by Hazza Thu Apr 30, 2015 7:25 pm

Locked.
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