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muahahah a happy poem!!!!!

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Post by Catty♡ Mon Jul 07, 2014 11:15 pm

like nuu. I was feeling very morbid and depressed to the point where it was unhealthy,  Ermmm so i really need a little happiness. And seriously BVB needs a HAPPY poem for a change.
And you won't believe how many words there are for happy. well let's find out. Shall we?  GAHHH;DDD 

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You stride down the road with
crystal sparkling eyes and a confident grin
the dazzling sunlight contrasts deeply with your dark hair
summer always has this effect on you
you finally emerage from your depression
like a rainbow after a hurricane
there is a light airy bounce in your step
a fellow human waves;
you give them a true smile,
very different from your usual smirk and haughty air
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talking to your crush
you have a light flirty laugh
a grin that illuminates your whole face
with a pure light
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only the sharpest eyes
and experienced mind
could observe the faint outlines of
dark rims surrounding your eyes
carefully hidden with lots of makeup
the slight shadow in your laugh
and the fading yet ever lasting tingle of cruelty in your smile
that you can never get rid of.
it takes time to heal.
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                                                                                                                                                    crappp     . i got a dark ending AAH.
WHALE ANY WHO THATS MY ATTEMPT AT HAPPY POETRY.   Ermmm 
comment cause i love to read your comments they make me smile.  yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 
forever, Catty 
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Post by Admin Tue Jul 08, 2014 4:06 am

Woah this is a brilliant poem! I love it and I love how you've experimented with a different theme rather than darkness :DD Keep it up gurrlll  awwwwwwwww for me? r
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Post by King K Tue Jul 08, 2014 11:13 am

The happiness amg, love it!! Very Happy
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Post by Hazza Tue Jul 08, 2014 12:56 pm

I loved how you focused on happiness this time. Sometimes it's hard to do a different theme, but you did it wonderfully!
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Post by Sadie♡ Tue Jul 08, 2014 12:57 pm

Omg this is amazing I adore this<3333
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Post by Hazza Mon Aug 18, 2014 5:03 pm

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