Eve by Ireland

This is my new story:)

Chapter 1

Hi! My name is Ella. I am at school doing a boring test. I am in 4th Grade. My best friend, Eve is having the time of her life reading a book because she is done with her test. I am stuck on a question. My weakness is math. I finally get done with the test and it is time for lunch. I sit by Eve and eat my lunch quick. Now it is time for recess. I sit on the bench with Eve until it is time for another test. After the test I go home and do some boring homework. I eat dinner and go to bed. In thirty minutes I fall into a deep sleep.


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Chapter 2
The following morning I wake up late at 8:30. I hurry and get dressed, brush my hair, eat breakfast, brush my teeth and get my backpack. I start running to school but then I realize biking is faster so I get my bike. I am about halfway when I see Eve. She says, I have been waiting for you Ella. I reply, woke up late. Hop on, you'll get there faster. I smile

I really like this! more!

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Chapter 3
When me and Eve finally get to school, My teacher Ms. Ellis is teaching math. She takes our tardy slips and continues teaching. After Math we each read for a little bit and go to lunch. We eat sandwiches ( My favorite ) and beans. Then we go to recess. Eve is very talented. She does five backwalkovers and ten cartwheels in ten seconds. She is also really pretty. I only have freckles and red hair. I hear the whistle and recess is over.

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keep adding more (hint) I would just keep making a new post and make the chapters longer.. c:

Great work!

Chapter 4

 When we get back inside Eve passes me a note. It said, I am moving in six months. I was shocked. I wrote, no no no no no don't move. Who am I gonna walk to school with? I passed the note. She wrote back and passed it to me. It said, your bike, LOL. I put the note in my desk and held in my sadness. Then we started math. I work on another boring test and when I get done I pass the note back to Eve.

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Chapter 5
Today is Friday so I invite Eve over for the night. We talk about her moving. I ask her, where are you moving to? She says, Vietnam. I gasp. But that's to far! I say. Eve grabs a gumball and shrugs. I can't stand Eve leaving me. Who is gonna wait an hour for me when I get up late? Who is gonna walk to school with me? Who is gonna play with me? Who is gonna sit on the bench and talk with me until recess is over? Who is gonna share secrets with me? I grab my stuffed doggie and squeeze it. I say, Oh Eve, don't leave!

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MOOOREE!

I love this  Can you post more!?

Chapter 6

When I woke up Eve was still asleep. I went and got some cheerios for breakfast and when I got back to my room Eve was sitting up on my bed, sleepy. She says, good morning. I say, good morning. We go outside and play softball, we take turns riding my bike, and we watch tv. We then go to Subway for lunch. After lunch Eve has to go home. We walk to her house, two miles away. When we get to her door, I say Bye Eve! She says, Bye! See you soon! I walked home.

This is such a great story, please write more.
And just a little suggestion: Can you make them a little longer? Thanks!!

This is what Ella looks like    This is what Eve looks like.

This is awesome!  Thanks for the update!