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Post by Ireland Mon Sep 14, 2015 10:28 am

Gawd have I improved 3305hk9

What do you think?

Pleeeaase be super honest. It's better than saying you like it when it's the worst thing in the world Ermmm
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Post by Hazza Mon Sep 14, 2015 12:37 pm

I like it, it's cool!
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Post by Rydel. Mon Sep 14, 2015 5:51 pm

It's looks nice and cool, I love the effects. I like it (:
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Post by King K Tue Sep 15, 2015 12:22 pm

It is beautiful!!!!!
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Post by Admin Tue Sep 15, 2015 4:36 pm

Since you want honesty then that is what you shall get! Very Happy

To put it bluntly, there's too much going on. I think simplicity is key if you want a really brilliant graphic and that comes from not overworking it. I feel that the lightning texture/images should be placed behind all the images of Selena.. *in terms of layering order*. You should make one of the pictures of Selena at full opacity (fully visible) so there's a kind of focus piece. At the moment, there's nothing distinctly standing out.. If you see what I mean?

(you could make the image of her face fully visible or the three images of her.. xD)

On to positives, this is so so so good! The text works, but could be made bigger and more interesting font perhaps?? The colours are fluid and I like the pictures of lightning you used! Selena is a complete queen so no arguments on that front! It's overall pretty stunning and my critique is quite minute in the grand scheme of things! I'm honestly hugely impressed because that is a humongous improvement!! Ahaaa, I'll shut up now loool
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Post by Ireland Wed Sep 16, 2015 5:05 pm

Anika wrote:Since you want honesty then that is what you shall get! Very Happy

To put it bluntly, there's too much going on. I think simplicity is key if you want a really brilliant graphic and that comes from not overworking it. I feel that the lightning texture/images should be placed behind all the images of Selena.. *in terms of layering order*. You should make one of the pictures of Selena at full opacity (fully visible) so there's a kind of focus piece. At the moment, there's nothing distinctly standing out.. If you see what I mean?

(you could make the image of her face fully visible or the three images of her.. xD)

On to positives, this is so so so good! The text works, but could be made bigger and more interesting font perhaps?? The colours are fluid and I like the pictures of lightning you used! Selena is a complete queen so no arguments on that front! It's overall pretty stunning and my critique is quite minute in the grand scheme of things! I'm honestly hugely impressed because that is a humongous improvement!! Ahaaa, I'll shut up now lool

Thanks everyone! Especially you Anika (:
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Post by Admin Thu Sep 17, 2015 3:19 pm

Anytime! If you want me to look at any of your other graphics, just fire me a PM. Very Happy
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Post by Hazza Thu Nov 19, 2015 7:18 pm

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