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Post by Guest Sat Nov 02, 2013 9:58 pm

we are now like vicious animals 
fighting to the top of the throne
people think it's pretty rational
try to be noticed trying to be known
listening to the cries
watching all the tears and blood
society filled with lies
brawl out of the flood

money, fame, and power 
that's all we want
trying way too hard at the hour
pushing people out the hunt
flying pass the things that matter
filling the world with greed
see the great earth shatter
well, that's all we need
this poem was basically suppose to mean a whole lot. it's basically what the world and society is now.. sorry if this horrible poem hurt your eyes and mind..


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Post by Ireland Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:00 pm

nice!
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Post by Maria Sun Nov 03, 2013 2:20 am

PerksOfBeingADreamer wrote:
we are now like vicious animals 
fighting to the top of the throne
people think it's pretty rational
try to be noticed trying to be known
listening to the cries
watching all the tears and blood
society filled with lies
brawl out of the flood

money, fame, and power 
that's all we want
trying way too hard at the hour
pushing people out the hunt
flying pass the things that matter
filling the world with greed
see the great earth shatter
well, that's all we need
this poem was basically suppose to mean a whole lot. it's basically what the world and society is now.. sorry if this horrible poem hurt your eyes and mind..
This describes Afghanistan and all the muslim countriew! It also describes Russia and kinda America
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Post by Guest Sun Nov 03, 2013 5:24 am

Aw, I like it, it gives some powerful emotions <33

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Post by Admin Sat Nov 09, 2013 5:43 pm

wow this is a beautifully written power, its very emotive!
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Post by Luci Mon Dec 09, 2013 3:27 pm

AMAZING!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! how did you come up with this???????????????????????????????????????????????
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Post by Sadie♡ Mon Dec 09, 2013 4:21 pm

This a an amazing poem! Lots of powerful emotions! Great job<3
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Post by Guest Mon Dec 09, 2013 11:52 pm

Thank you sadie and luci xx
aha, i just write poem ideas on my computer and build off of them xD

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Post by Guest Tue Dec 10, 2013 10:23 am

you have some serious talent!<333

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