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Post by Ash Fri Jul 18, 2014 11:34 pm

hi guys.
yes it's me again.
yeah I've been writing more songs,
surprise.

I thought I would share some of them like weekly ya kno maybe

well anyway, here's my latest one, it probably sucks because I'm not used to making them about real love so here go.


your my light, I saw you flash before my eyes.
you are the knot that ties me together.

I follow you,
you take me to,
my dream world.

it's time to face it, you lit up my world,
I can't ever let you go.

you went right in, stole my heart
I can't open my eyes,
cause it was all lies before.
you found me, you saved me from myself.

what did they want?
I always thought it was for something greater than me
I felt like I needed to be,
something more

you came along, changed the story around.
I wound up here in your arms, here in your arms.
you held me tight like a charm, tight like a charm.

you went right in, stole my heart
I can't open my eyes,
before you it was all lies.
you found me, you saved me from myself.

oh you went right in
you took my heart away.
oh I can't open my eyes, before you, it was all their lies,
ohh you found me ohh you complete me ohhh you saved me from myself.

there's this part that's come over me, thinking we had everything.
don't turn your back now, cause I've been waiting for hours


*imagine it's piano here idk*

oh you went right in
you took my heart away.
oh I can't open my eyes, before you, it was all their lies,
ohh you found me ohh you complete me ohhh you saved me from myself.
woahh ohh ohh

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Post by Guest Fri Jul 18, 2014 11:38 pm

It's amazing!!!!!!! :DDDDD I tried imagining it on the radio :]

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Post by Moose Fri Jul 18, 2014 11:38 pm

nice ! c:
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Post by Hazza Fri Jul 18, 2014 11:40 pm

Omg bae you're so talented! Keep on writing songs please (:
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Post by Ash Fri Jul 18, 2014 11:40 pm

thanks guys.
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Post by Maddy Sat Jul 19, 2014 12:18 am

Nice (:
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Post by Ash Sat Jul 19, 2014 1:38 pm

thankssss
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Post by Admin Sat Jul 19, 2014 2:15 pm

You're amazingly talented at song-writing gah! <3
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Post by King K Sun Jul 20, 2014 8:10 am

POTATO IS SO TALENTED OKAY LY
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Post by Ash Wed Jul 23, 2014 11:12 am

here's my next one I hope you guys like it. Razz

I think of you as perfection.
I look back at your reflection.
I think of all the days spent.
wonderin' what they all meant.

now the days have past,
they've gone way too fast.
felt like yesterday was our last.

but now,
all you do is stand there,
wonder in' why I'm still here,
feel the pain in my heart,
like I got shot with a dart,
this is only the first part,
I wish I could save you from this mess,
but I know it will mess up the rest.

as the days go by without you,
I feel the pain less and less.
I guess it's better that I let you go.

wishing I could just forget you,
it's not as easy as it sounds,
because forgetting you is impossible.

I miss you telling me it's gonna be okay,
cause I haven't felt that way since.

but now,
all you do is stand there,
wonder in' why I'm still here,
feel the pain in my heart,
like I got shot with a dart,
this is only the first part,
I wish I could save you from this mess,
but I know it will mess up the rest.

all you do is stand there,
wonder in' why I'm still here,
feel the pain in my heart,
like I got shot with a dart,
this is only the first part,
I wish I could save you from this mess,
but I know it will mess up the rest.

forget it all, make it the past,
it's all for the best,
first, last, whatever works,
cause without you here the pain gets worse and worse.

I just need to let you go now.


all you do is stand there,
wonder in' why I'm still here,
feel the pain in my heart,
like I got shot with a dart,
this is only the first part,
I wish I could save you from this mess,
but I know it will mess up the rest.

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Post by Admin Wed Jul 23, 2014 11:22 am

oh man, Abby your songs are incredible. You're a really gifted song-writer :O The amount of depth and emotion you put into your songs is truly.. just wow.. They're just amazing. <3
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Post by Hazza Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:21 pm

Omg bae these songs are just so good! You never know, but try recording them for real. You seriously have a talent at writing these.
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Post by Ash Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:44 pm

ive tried recording but like you heard i kinda suck, aha. but anyways, thanks guys.
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Post by Ani Fri Jul 25, 2014 2:25 pm

sweetie, you seriously have a talent for writing songs:) keep writing more 
these songs are so good 
hey... you should write songs for one direction.
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Post by Ash Sat Jul 26, 2014 8:08 pm

haha thanks
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Post by Ash Sun Jul 27, 2014 6:52 pm

I start to wonder.
what's really under your 'love'.

the day you left,
you acted like you were under stress.
did you not realize?
did you even notice me?

I guess since they say 'everything happens for a reason'
guess that means I was meant to be alone.

your pulling further and further away
I only wish you would stay
but I guess it's for the best

you said you never wanted me to change.
why didn't you ever make me feel that way?
I guess I don't really know ya
it's what I never told ya
I guess I don't really know ya
it's what I never told ya
can ya please make this pain go away,
it's the only way you wanted to stay,
only if I could do it on my own,
I guess I was meant to be alone.

cause of the pain
you left me to drain
you didn't really care,
like a nightmare,
I told myself 'I guess I'm meant to be alone' .

was it something you didn't understand?
or was it because of your cold This forum has blocked this word. -Admin. heart?
you really couldn't see it?
is that why you left?
you couldn't even see
that you were my dreams

guess I can't really explain better
the rain is pourin' harder
you left my pain in me cause you thought I should suffer


you left me in pain,
the rain will never fade,
you left me here broken
I'm in the worst place right now
so I've barely even spoken

all thanks to you,
I'll never come through,
all the pain grew.

I guess I don't really know ya
it's what I never told ya
I guess I don't really know ya
it's what I never told ya
can ya please make this pain go away,
it's the only way you wanted to stay,
only if I could do it on my own,
but I guess I'm meant to be alone


I guess I'm meant to be alone.



go away go away
you didn't even care for the pain, for the pain
go away go away
your eyes grow lighter,
mine only get darker,
cause everything's only gettin' harder.




comments? maybe or maybe not

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Post by Hazza Sun Jul 27, 2014 7:00 pm

Omg I love it<33
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Post by Ash Sun Jul 27, 2014 7:27 pm

thankss bby
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Post by Sadie♡ Sun Jul 27, 2014 7:49 pm

Ohhh that I love that!!<3333
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Post by Admin Mon Jul 28, 2014 7:40 am

omg, you're so talented ijustcan't :O Just incredible, wooow <3
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Post by Ash Wed Jul 30, 2014 10:47 pm

I gave my heart to you,
but you threw it away.

you cut my heart open,
I was never okay.

you said you loved me but i guess it was a lie,
you told me you'd rather have me die.

I have all this life to live,
I have all my life to love,
all the love to give,
but your words broke me down,
told me I should be alone.
now I know that you were never the one,
now I'm gone.

maybe I just took it the wrong way,
maybe it was jealousy.
I don't know, why don't you tell me?

can't take the pain any longer,
ain't gonna let the rain fall.
I gotta get over you,
gotta break this stupid wall.

I have all this life to live,
I have all my life to love,
all the love to give,
but your words broke me down,
told me I should be alone.
now I know that you were never the one,
now I'm gone.

I have to realize I have more than you,
gotta realize that I gotta move.
realize that I can take it,
ain't gonna let this love burn.

I have all this life to live,
I have all my life to love,
all the love to give,
but your words broke me down,
told me I should be alone.
now I know that you were never the one,
now I'm gone.

can't take it anymore,
gotta let this go.



let me know your comments, thank you.
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Post by Hazza Wed Jul 30, 2014 10:51 pm

Omg bae you're so talented, I always love your songs<333
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Post by ETRD Thu Jul 31, 2014 12:19 am

OMG abby! That was amazing!
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Post by Ash Thu Jul 31, 2014 10:03 am

thanks guyss
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Post by Sadie♡ Thu Jul 31, 2014 11:03 am

That is stunning  Crying
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