TASK 4: Team A

Pony2418- That's alright! I believe you said you didn't mind if we added on to your story? If so, someone can finish it up. We could also vote. I was thinking it would be really cool if we could figure out a way to combine everyone's stories into one large story? We would have to change some things in each story, but it may be worth it if we are willing to spend the time to put everything together.

Hiya!

Got some extra minutes to get on (Yay!), but I was wondering maybe we could also add our BV username to the story. We could change the setting and characters in my story and put one person's BV username for "Amy" and then the rest of us can all be her friends coming over. I was thinking, maybe it should be in taken place at the Kooky Spooky House in Bearville. What do you think?

That is a really creative idea! I like that. (:

Yeah, but does she have a friend who is a guy?

yes i am EvanPopstar rofl

We need to figure something out since it's due tomorrow. D: Should we vote or something? I'm just afraid that might hurt the people who don't get chosen's feelings..unless everyone is okay with voting. (:

Let's make it into all one story

That was originally what I was saying, but no one said anything so I wasn't sure if everyone liked the idea. (: How should we do that?

like the grimms fairy tales but Team A's Wonderfully Enchanting and Haunting Fairy Tales then like make a novel out of them lol

It's due today though! I don't think we have time for that. :c

Hmm shall I try and combine the stories together?

Eleanor wrote:Hmm shall I try and combine the stories together?

lets make it like that just put them all in one big book rofl

The Night Before Halloween
“Halloween is almost here! What do you need I should be? Could I look pretty with one of those skies, silk, gowns with flowers on it and white outlined on the borders, mother used to wear when she was little? Or…” I started.
    “No one ever goes treat-a-treating anymore, Amy,” my older sister, Ollie replied, rolling her eyes.
    “Not true,” I protest and point out the window "Look there's timothyfluffyfriend from Bearville!". "And?" “Anyway besides, you get candy!” I shoved a handful of candy to Ollie’s face.  Two Kit Kats, one Baby Ruth, three small bags of M&Ms, one York, and a bunch of candy corns. To my surprise, she took the York and unwrapped the wrapper. 
    “So? We can share your bag of candy when you get back.”
    “No,” I placed the handful of sweets on the table and turned to walk away. I glance back one more time before I walk out of the room and said, “When I go treat-a-treating, I am earning them. Myself. And if you want them, you got to earn them yourself.” 
    “Ugg!!”
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On the Night of  Halloween
    After mom helped me into my costume, I looked at myself in the mirror. Now, I look like real Dorothy, except I made a little of my own exceptions and style to change it a bit. Being just Dorothy was boring.
    Mom added the finishing touch and commented as many comments as she could think of about me. It wasn’t the importance of me to remember each one. Finally, she suggested showing Dad my costume. I nodded and skipped out the room with the straw basket which held my stuffed puppy who will be my own, little Toto tonight. Ollie spotted me first, and of course, something mean has to come out of her mouth the time she saw me. “But Amy, love, on Halloween, you got to wear something scary, not,” then she looked down at what I was wearing, “this.” I bet she was jealous! 
    “You can wear anything on Halloween.” Ollie and I always argue. I wonder when we’re going to stop. ProbablyNever!
    “Enough chitchatting, girls, it’s time to go treat-a-treating. Ollie, where’s your costume?”
    “Mom, I told you a million times! I’m not going!” Ollie looked annoyed.
    “Ah, sorry sweets, I forgot. Now, whose going with Amy?”
    “Mom!” I had to clear her memory, “Remember, I am going with my friends?!”
    “My, my. You girls have such a good memory,” she knocked her own head and said, “I do need to clear my head. I will be back getting the candy bowl.” 
    When Mom came back, my friends came over and they were munching on the Spooky Cookies Mom had left for them when they arrived. Then they grab me out into the dark. For safety, a parent was with us. Lots of fun is going to happen tonight! 


 a zombie started chasing Timothy, he panicked and he ran into a cub condo.  The people there thought he was bizarre.  Untill the zombie was throwing mud on the window.  They called the police--but they were too late.  The zombie ran away.  "What should we do?"  Timothy asked the police officer.  "I'd say start a search party."  The officer replied.


So he started a search party.  Timothy volunteered to help and so did Amy While they were  walking they were afraid, they was shivering insanely.  Then the zombie grabbed them an they struggled to get out, but he did.  Timothy punched the zombie and lifted up his face.  It was a human.  "Natecybearguide????" He yelled loudly.  "It's halloween you gotta do some pranks!" He replied.  Then the police heard about it and everyone in bearville did.  And they all lived happily ever after!  Except nate had a talk with the police officer about how that was over the top for a prank. 


Okay so I combined Pony and Timothy's stories together, I hope they are okay and none of the creators minded. If anyone wants to refine it anymore than feel free c:

I liKe that elf <33

thank you potato<333

I'm closing this at 4:30 pm eastern time. You can use that time to read over your story and make any edits/changes you need, and when it's locked please don't edit your post in anyway. Make sure to also decide on which story you are using to vote on if there are multiple stories written. If there are no multiple stories written, then you don't need to deal with doing that step.

i love it!!!!!!

That is awesome! Thanks for combining them Eleanor. c:

Thank you Savvy!<33 Sorry for neglecting to comment on this thread earlier, I kinda forgot about it  Is that the final copy?<3

sureoa!

Sorry for extending the due date longer, but this is now due. Thank you so much for all of your entries! I'm going to read them and then announce the winner. Stay tuned!

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